01-24-2009, 03:27 PM | #16 |
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"Invisible bubble"
It´s been a while since you know me But you keep on treating me as though I were untouchable And I bear it no more I thought you wouldn´t do it but I was so wrong I don´t wanna lose the friend Now I find myself trying to pinch This invicible bubble everyone made around me up Stop to idiolize what they made of me I´m made by the same things as you I feel the things the same way you do I wanna have that that you do… *I´m almost dying inside of this jail Please don´t become in one of them I don´t wanna have the need to be Someone you wanna have living with you Take me as I am or leave me alone* Notice that you won´t wake up next to miss sunshine everyday Notice I won´t ever carry this smile that seems to be stuck on my face I´m not as friendly as you think so don´t smile at me with no reason I can be more than unbearable I can be very stubborn if you try to tell me something else *Est I wake up watching the ceiling and I stand still While I am mesmorize thinking on a distant hill I notice how you slowly move to the other side And left me lying here all alone The sick thing is that you keep on being there *Est |
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It´s been a while...well maybe someone enjoy these...
"Part of nature" Sunbeams bath my face and push my to get up from bed Bird´s singing make me smile I went to bathroom and look at myself on the mirror Two green lakes give me back the truth Day shine like me *We are part of nature and not the opposite We should be glad to have the chance to keep on smiling Because she´s blooding through too many sides Though it always focusing to show the contrary* Live your life without having fear of what they will say Without fear by the consequences (If you act thinking right, it won´t be bad) Live each day giving in everything without holding something back Smile will invade your face if you get jump over the wall *Est How if she keep on smiling won´t you get it too? Life ain´t hard, what make it hard is the one that human being created This society takes charge domesticating you and telling you you are nothing without her But do not believe it, my love Search to be happy with what you do and don´t pay attention to what they say Speak from what you feel and not from what they wanna hear you say *Est Have you ever seen a sad lion at liberty? You just see them like that when they are in human´s hands Don´t forget that your case is the same and to can laugh You need to be free from the man that ever tries to jail you *Est *Est That was it! |
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I can read between your lines whether riddles or free verses. I kinda like reading stuff like that. And im glad I'm back here in this forum. Hi Sonne. don't be afraid to put on your lines and maybe you hear melody coming out of your lines. In the morning, I guess, your mind is so refresh and so green as a lush of words spewing from your creative mind. Keep 'em coming.
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Hi:
Here´s another one, thanks for your words, greenpoet This is a sad one, well... which of these aren´t jaja. Enjoy! "Remorse" I want to cross the barriers of death Put my head inside the wolf´s mouth Or take a gun and aim at the middle of my head And then just put it to rest I want to involve myself in a shooting *I think I´m going crazy And all I hear is your voice Saying I shouldn´t do that You begged and cried What for me was just a game, a joke For you was it the end of the world* I just want one thing I want to be on your side And ask you for pardon *Chorus This ing pills don´t help at all I wake up screaming and sweating Hearing the shot of the gun And there´s no place I can hide I see the blood on my hands and on my shirt Brother!... I never meant to harm you This sob of mine don´t let me breath And I´m so afraid *Chorus I saw the hare and suddenly I turn over The shot blew up and I saw you But it was already too late I tried to do everything I could But it doesn´t help at all, it was simply useless And I´m here on my knees crying and I know nothing will cease this aching in my heart *Chorus (x2) |
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Whatta! I'm not familiar with this lyrics. Is this a real song or have you written this.
" Remorse", painful. there was an accidental tragic death of a loved one and the writer's feeling of remorse because of his action that cause the death of a loved one. This is too dark. You want to take yourself from the dark pit, but you can't.
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"Whatta! I'm not familiar with this lyrics. Is this a real song or have you written this."
What does mean Whatta... (What a ???) Of course you are not familiar to them cause is the first time you read them, yeah I have wrote it! But what does it mean "A real song or that I have written it"? jajaja Just kidding!!! It´s a real song from me Take care |
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"Whatta"is just a colloquial word or expression..like whatta man, whatta girl... as in what a man or what a girl.. or oh man! that's great! or maybe what is this all about!? hahahah.. At first, when I was reading your "Remorse" post, I saw there was a chorus (definitely its a song, I said to myself) then I counted the syllables per line, if its a lyrics in a song since it has to go with the melody or the notes. Well, anyway thank you for sharing your expression of thoughts or your song. I feel so privilege to read those lines here in this forum
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First of all thank you for the explanation, greenpoet
Second the privilege is mine, I mean your words really push me to keep writting And third... I think you write as well, at least I have seen bluediamond called you a poet... So... Where can I read your posts???? Take care |
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I remember I started a thread way back in 2006 in this forum, just search "Amused by the Muse" under the Abyss Section and "Poetry 101" under Absence of Fear Section. There are some few postings about poetry and some poems I wrote. But just like you, I felt the same way at first, that, maybe there would be no audience or anyone who will care about what I wrote. But there were few who responded to that thread. I was just lucky enough to have atleast 4 or 5 replies from the members. As what Kiera said that poems are quite personal and maybe some would have read it but just don’ t know what to reply or what to say.
* By the way, I have been writing poems naturally ever since I read this quotation by Phylles Balittle,” If you haven’t had atleast a slight poetic crack in the heart, you have been cheated by nature.” I just found out that I had this so called “poetic crack” in 2005 when I read the lyrics of “Kiss The Flame.” by Jewel. She was quite a hook that got ,this flame inside of me ,started. Definitely, I’m way far from being an expert on poems, that is why I call myself green poet, like a young bamboo shoot. * I’ve learned that it was fun to write some lines and some poems. I shared my poems to my friend who sings and composes songs. And she liked my work.. we were able to convert it into songs. We were like “Music and Lyrics” She gave me melody and then I gave her some lyrics or lines. That’s why I have learned about the syllables per line. I’m a fast learner... I have collaborated five songs as fillers from her album.. Oh, by the way, I would like to personally invite you to visit this website at www.myspace.com/agathasvoice . I collaborated with her the songs “By Your Side” which I think its still posted there and “All I Know”. * I hope you like it.
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Thank you very much, don´t doubt I wouldn´t do it
I just write down the thread you said, so I don´t forget the names and the site is opening... I´ll tell you Take care, Sonne |
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I couldn´t enter in the Abscence of fear, greenpoet . Couldn´t you just send it in here???
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Realist
I can´t remember when I was happy Sadness and lonliness corner me Anyhow I´m alone Nothing makes me laugh *I feel myself like a statue At the edge of destuction* (x2) *I don´t believe this can change But I don´t see everything black I´m just realist* There´s a battle liberating Everyday inside of my soul Sadness against lonliness Finally the both tie My happniess is so small And besides it´s up trapped That when it saw the battle just give up I have so much pain That I just shed it This is too much for me And too much for you In the meantime I wait Because I have nothing to do *This life without meaning Maybe I should not think this way But I do I know this is a sad message But it´s mine And I shed blood for that abscence of happiness That I miss so bad*1 *Chorus *Chorus1 |
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Hey, Sonne . That is such a sad melody of your heart. Don't forget that there is always hope if we put our spirit up all the time. I wish to share with you this lyrics which my friend and I did in a song. I hope this would give you a lift somehow, knowing somebody is always by your side.
BY YOUR SIDE *** YOU SAW MY EYES WHEN THE WORLD BEGAN AND ALL THAT MATTERS KEPT IN TIME NOW WE'RE APART I FEEL YOUR HEART YOUR VOICE STILL LINGERS STILL ALIVE * DONT BE AFRAID IT'S WORTH THE WAIT KEEP HOLDING ON I'M HERE TO STAY * CHORUS : * AND WHEN YOU CALL EACH TIME YOU FALL I WILL BE THERE I'LL KEEP YOU SAFE AND WARM I'LL BE YOUR LIGHT ALL THROUGH THE NIGHT I'LL NEVER GO I WILL BE BY YOUR SIDE... BY YOUR SIDE * YOUR DREAMS AND HOPES WILL COME TO LIFE COZ’ I WILL NEVER EVER LET YOU DOWN * YOUR HEART AND MINE WALKS WITH DESIRE NO WALLS BETWEEN US WITH EVERY SMILE YOU LIFT ME UP YOU PUT ME HIGH NO NEED TO STRUGGLE NO NEED TO HIDE * (REPEAT CHORUS) * AND I KNOW SOMEDAY WE'LL FIND A WAY NO DREAMS WILL SHATTER NO HOPES WILL FAIL * (REPEAT CHORUS TILL FADE) *
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Ohhh thanks for this share of you. It´s a really lovely song!
I actually wrote "Realist" time ago, so don´t you worry. I use to feel worser if that could even be jaja, but time heals it all!! A question that may not be relate to anything of this... You dont speak spanish, right? Just curious... Take care, Sonne |
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I don't speak spanish fluently but I understand since we had spanish lessons way back in school. My ancestors spoke spanish fluently, jejeje.. because our country, Philippines was colonized before by spanish conquistadors in year 15 hundreds.
** By the way, thank you for appreciating the lyrics of “ BY YOUR SIDE” ,even though you haven't heard the song per se. ** Maybe, I can post a poem I made about finding one true love. I hope its not corny for you coz’ this poem was converted into a song afterwards. I could have kept it in my drawer for a life time and maybe not be able to share it with others until my singer composer friend saw this piece. And she said she love it... Here goes the poem before the conversion. YOU ARE MINE By Greenpoet I have seen love in many faces But never been struck by its power My heart has never been compelled to sing Though the melodies are there for me. * Yesterday, I toiled and plowed as life goes on Turning the pages of my days into years Writing and dreaming about one love deeply, For there are many things I often wondered. * My heart was winter –bound until I heard you sing; Suddenly my heart sang the day You struck love on me. * My hopes were homeless things before I saw your eyes I had no wings to fly until You carried me through * My heart is compelled to love As the sun is compelled to rise To give light as the day begins Then sets with magical tones as it ends. * Oh heart of love, That gives boundless pleasures of Coloring my blues to hues of rainbow My pilgrim heart treasures you. * My love... My one love... My everlasting love... You Are Mine....
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