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Old 12-29-2006, 03:01 PM   #1
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Here comes my muse out of no where.
Like a gust of wind, shook my soul within
I never really thought that I would find Jewel
In my search of my other divine self.
I found Jewel, the oasis of my barren artistry.
A reflection from within.

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Old 12-29-2006, 04:32 PM   #2
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I like it. Jewel would probably appreciate that. I like the oasis of my barren artistry line.
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Old 12-29-2006, 06:04 PM   #3
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I really like it too! Particularly 'In search of my other divine self'
That line intrigues me.

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Old 12-29-2006, 07:26 PM   #4
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welcome green poet i love this poem I think we can all relate to jewel somewhat as we search inside ourselves
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Old 12-30-2006, 04:20 AM   #5
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Thank you for appreciating my lone voice.
Now, Im not alone,
I feel I belong...
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Old 12-30-2006, 01:12 PM   #6
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Yes welcome to the forum
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Old 12-31-2006, 08:48 AM   #7
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Here comes my muse out of no where.
Like a gust of wind, shook my soul within
I never really thought that I would find Jewel
In my search of my other divine self.
I found Jewel, the oasis of my barren artistry.
A reflection from within.
Greenpoet, welcome! You've come to the right place! We love poetry and introspective thinking, after all - We're Jewel fans!!!
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Old 01-02-2007, 08:29 AM   #8
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My wish, is that I may always see her and listen to her songs forever.
Just in case, she will find herself in Stephenville to hibernate for awhile, this poem is dedicated to her.
I may search for her in the deep silence of my heart

KISS FROM HEAVEN
BY : Greenpoet for Jewel

The fair moon is rising
The keen stars are twinkling
The guitar is tinkling
But the notes are not sweet
'til you sing them again

The once starlight like diamonds of heaven
Now seemed to be a faint-cold midnight starless sky
Where is your voice most tender
That hath given these strings without a soul-
a soul of its own

The falling ore blazing fire
A kiss from heaven to earth
A rhapsody of sight beyond expression
My eyes not close and wish be true
Guitar strings are tinkling once again

For I hear from afar, the yodel of Jewel
And my heart is happy once again.
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Old 01-02-2007, 11:07 AM   #9
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ohh cute i really like that
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Old 01-02-2007, 11:50 AM   #10
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Thank you, Cris...just a little push, makes my heart want to write again.Really,Im amuse with the muse...
This one is for our muse, Jewel Kilcher- Hear ye...

PAINT ME A SONG
BY : GREENPOET


You color my life.
Bringing me sunshine
of sunlit skies.
Paint me a song.
Sing me your symphony.

Hum a tune or two,
Pen with different notes,
in different strokes.
Strum a chord, a key to my heart,
And delight your fingers
with your guitar.

Tonight, as the moon sleeps,
The stars will awaken.
Though the leaves are silent,
The dews of your melody scatter
like fireflies after the rain.

So won't you paint me your song, Jewel
Let me hear your voice
I never wanted to be ohh... so blue
Wont you paint me your awesome colors
Because you are a painter of souls
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Old 01-02-2007, 12:04 PM   #11
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wow that one is really good
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Old 01-16-2007, 03:29 AM   #12
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I would like to share this revised poem, I did last night.

Amuse By the Muse

Like a gust of wind,
The muse amuses me with her style.
Refreshes my soul with her smile.
Blowing kisses like butterflies,
As I cast my nets to catch while it flies.

Oh with such beauty!
“Never thought I would find you,
In the unfamiliar poetry, songs and stories,
from the journey you have tread

I read your book to the spine
Makes me shiver to discover,
A singer of songs and painter of souls,
Look what I found?
A girl with a golden hair,
Who got music in her soul,
And a voice to sing it too.

Nay! I say to you, not all the singers of a thousand years.

I found the oasis of my barren artistry
My rusty sword turned silver and mightier.
Tarnished armor turned glossier than ever
As If to set a duel with my self,
In search of the divine.

Thought my heart will remain cold
Until I heard you sing
And my heart starts to sing with you.
Coz’ You amuse me in ways :

Your mind is fertile as green meadows
Your skin white as snow.
I listen to your soul,
As I see the blueness of my own.
Won’t you let your songs fly across the miles
to fertile my heart.

While in the abyss of the unknown
Heard voices who led me out of my shell.
While in the heaven’s firmament
Saw millions of stars, all singing and twinkling
But they are not as bright as you have become
While you sing with the night winds.

Nay! I say to you, you are that star whom they call,”the Jewel”.
So when I look up at the sky, there you are to look upon.

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Old 02-27-2009, 06:26 PM   #13
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BEAUTIFUL, man!!!!

The one in which you talk about to find your "jewel" is very sweet and I also like how you recycles lines from your poems, like Jewel do
I decide to don´t send you just a PM, but to recover this thread and encourage you to keep on showing us your poems (if you agree )

P.S.: Sorry for that of "Man" I called you at the beginning... I don´t know why I think you are a male jeje.
Now I will search for "Poetry 101".

Well... take care and see you
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Old 03-02-2009, 01:17 PM   #14
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oH, Man! You have retrieved it... my thread out of the pile of threads. Thank you for appreciating some poems I made for Jewel. Surprisingly, I was also hooked into her flock of fans. We all have been engendered by the power of her artistry. She's like a magnet.. she inspires people, right?
This poem is for you, Sonne.

IN THE SHADE OF GREEN
By :Greenpoet

Last night, I was standing alone
Waiting and hiding in the shade
I felt the rain on the roof
I let the thunder rolled its angry throes
Thowing tantrums over my head
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So let the rain pour down
So let the lightnings come down
So let the angry skies' mouth is press
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But I will not run through the rain
I will hide and wait in the shade
I will get down and pray
Knowing it will calm down
While I'm in the shade of green.
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Old 03-02-2009, 01:44 PM   #15
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Very pretty!!!
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