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Old 01-24-2009, 03:27 PM   #16
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"Invisible bubble"

It´s been a while since you know me
But you keep on treating me as though I were untouchable
And I bear it no more
I thought you wouldn´t do it but I was so wrong

I don´t wanna lose the friend
Now I find myself trying to pinch
This invicible bubble everyone made around me up
Stop to idiolize what they made of me

I´m made by the same things as you
I feel the things the same way you do
I wanna have that that you do…

*I´m almost dying inside of this jail
Please don´t become in one of them
I don´t wanna have the need to be
Someone you wanna have living with you
Take me as I am or leave me alone*

Notice that you won´t wake up next to miss sunshine everyday
Notice I won´t ever carry this smile that seems to be stuck on my face
I´m not as friendly as you think so don´t smile at me with no reason
I can be more than unbearable
I can be very stubborn if you try to tell me something else

*Est

I wake up watching the ceiling and I stand still
While I am mesmorize thinking on a distant hill
I notice how you slowly move to the other side
And left me lying here all alone
The sick thing is that you keep on being there

*Est
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Old 02-10-2009, 12:27 PM   #17
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It´s been a while...well maybe someone enjoy these...

"Part of nature"

Sunbeams bath my face and push my to get up from bed
Bird´s singing make me smile
I went to bathroom and look at myself on the mirror
Two green lakes give me back the truth
Day shine like me

*We are part of nature and not the opposite
We should be glad to have the chance to keep on smiling
Because she´s blooding through too many sides
Though it always focusing to show the contrary*

Live your life without having fear of what they will say
Without fear by the consequences (If you act thinking right, it won´t be bad)
Live each day giving in everything without holding something back
Smile will invade your face if you get jump over the wall

*Est

How if she keep on smiling won´t you get it too?
Life ain´t hard, what make it hard is the one that human being created
This society takes charge domesticating you and telling you you are nothing without her
But do not believe it, my love

Search to be happy with what you do and don´t pay attention to what they say
Speak from what you feel and not from what they wanna hear you say

*Est

Have you ever seen a sad lion at liberty?
You just see them like that when they are in human´s hands
Don´t forget that your case is the same and to can laugh
You need to be free from the man that ever tries to jail you

*Est
*Est





That was it!
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Old 02-11-2009, 01:35 AM   #18
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I can read between your lines whether riddles or free verses. I kinda like reading stuff like that. And im glad I'm back here in this forum. Hi Sonne. don't be afraid to put on your lines and maybe you hear melody coming out of your lines. In the morning, I guess, your mind is so refresh and so green as a lush of words spewing from your creative mind. Keep 'em coming.
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Old 02-21-2009, 05:05 PM   #19
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Hi:

Here´s another one, thanks for your words, greenpoet
This is a sad one, well... which of these aren´t jaja.
Enjoy!


"Remorse"


I want to cross the barriers of death
Put my head inside the wolf´s mouth
Or take a gun and aim at the middle of my head
And then just put it to rest
I want to involve myself in a shooting

*I think I´m going crazy
And all I hear is your voice
Saying I shouldn´t do that
You begged and cried
What for me was just a game, a joke
For you was it the end of the world*

I just want one thing
I want to be on your side
And ask you for pardon

*Chorus

This ing pills don´t help at all
I wake up screaming and sweating
Hearing the shot of the gun
And there´s no place I can hide
I see the blood on my hands and on my shirt
Brother!... I never meant to harm you
This sob of mine don´t let me breath
And I´m so afraid

*Chorus

I saw the hare and suddenly I turn over
The shot blew up and I saw you
But it was already too late
I tried to do everything I could
But it doesn´t help at all, it was simply useless
And I´m here on my knees crying and
I know nothing will cease this aching in my heart

*Chorus (x2)
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Old 02-24-2009, 02:51 AM   #20
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Whatta! I'm not familiar with this lyrics. Is this a real song or have you written this.
" Remorse", painful. there was an accidental tragic death of a loved one and the writer's feeling of remorse because of his action that cause the death of a loved one. This is too dark. You want to take yourself from the dark pit, but you can't.
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Old 02-24-2009, 12:58 PM   #21
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"Whatta! I'm not familiar with this lyrics. Is this a real song or have you written this."

What does mean Whatta... (What a ???)
Of course you are not familiar to them cause is the first time you read them, yeah I have wrote it! But what does it mean "A real song or that I have written it"? jajaja Just kidding!!!
It´s a real song from me

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Old 02-25-2009, 01:04 AM   #22
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"Whatta"is just a colloquial word or expression..like whatta man, whatta girl... as in what a man or what a girl.. or oh man! that's great! or maybe what is this all about!? hahahah.. At first, when I was reading your "Remorse" post, I saw there was a chorus (definitely its a song, I said to myself) then I counted the syllables per line, if its a lyrics in a song since it has to go with the melody or the notes. Well, anyway thank you for sharing your expression of thoughts or your song. I feel so privilege to read those lines here in this forum
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Old 02-25-2009, 03:06 PM   #23
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First of all thank you for the explanation, greenpoet
Second the privilege is mine, I mean your words really push me to keep writting
And third... I think you write as well, at least I have seen bluediamond called you a poet... So... Where can I read your posts????
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Old 02-25-2009, 04:25 PM   #24
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I remember I started a thread way back in 2006 in this forum, just search "Amused by the Muse" under the Abyss Section and "Poetry 101" under Absence of Fear Section. There are some few postings about poetry and some poems I wrote. But just like you, I felt the same way at first, that, maybe there would be no audience or anyone who will care about what I wrote. But there were few who responded to that thread. I was just lucky enough to have atleast 4 or 5 replies from the members. As what Kiera said that poems are quite personal and maybe some would have read it but just don’ t know what to reply or what to say.
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By the way, I have been writing poems naturally ever since I read this quotation by Phylles Balittle,” If you haven’t had atleast a slight poetic crack in the heart, you have been cheated by nature.” I just found out that I had this so called “poetic crack” in 2005 when I read the lyrics of “Kiss The Flame.” by Jewel. She was quite a hook that got ,this flame inside of me ,started. Definitely, I’m way far from being an expert on poems, that is why I call myself green poet, like a young bamboo shoot.
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I’ve learned that it was fun to write some lines and some poems. I shared my poems to my friend who sings and composes songs. And she liked my work.. we were able to convert it into songs. We were like “Music and Lyrics” She gave me melody and then I gave her some lyrics or lines. That’s why I have learned about the syllables per line. I’m a fast learner... I have collaborated five songs as fillers from her album.. Oh, by the way, I would like to personally invite you to visit this website at www.myspace.com/agathasvoice . I collaborated with her the songs “By Your Side” which I think its still posted there and “All I Know”.
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I hope you like it.
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Old 02-27-2009, 06:07 PM   #25
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Thank you very much, don´t doubt I wouldn´t do it
I just write down the thread you said, so I don´t forget the names and the site is opening...

I´ll tell you
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Old 02-27-2009, 06:30 PM   #26
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I couldn´t enter in the Abscence of fear, greenpoet . Couldn´t you just send it in here???
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Old 03-02-2009, 01:48 PM   #27
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Realist

I can´t remember when I was happy
Sadness and lonliness corner me
Anyhow I´m alone
Nothing makes me laugh

*I feel myself like a statue
At the edge of destuction* (x2)

*I don´t believe this can change
But I don´t see everything black
I´m just realist*

There´s a battle liberating
Everyday inside of my soul
Sadness against lonliness
Finally the both tie
My happniess is so small
And besides it´s up trapped
That when it saw the battle just give up

I have so much pain
That I just shed it
This is too much for me
And too much for you
In the meantime I wait
Because I have nothing to do

*This life without meaning
Maybe I should not think this way
But I do
I know this is a sad message
But it´s mine
And I shed blood for that abscence of happiness
That I miss so bad*1

*Chorus
*Chorus1
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Old 03-03-2009, 03:01 AM   #28
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Hey, Sonne . That is such a sad melody of your heart. Don't forget that there is always hope if we put our spirit up all the time. I wish to share with you this lyrics which my friend and I did in a song. I hope this would give you a lift somehow, knowing somebody is always by your side.

BY YOUR SIDE
***
YOU SAW MY EYES WHEN THE WORLD BEGAN
AND ALL THAT MATTERS KEPT IN TIME
NOW WE'RE APART I FEEL YOUR HEART
YOUR VOICE STILL LINGERS STILL ALIVE
*
DONT BE AFRAID IT'S WORTH THE WAIT
KEEP HOLDING ON I'M HERE TO STAY
*
CHORUS :
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AND WHEN YOU CALL
EACH TIME YOU FALL
I WILL BE THERE
I'LL KEEP YOU SAFE AND WARM
I'LL BE YOUR LIGHT ALL THROUGH THE NIGHT
I'LL NEVER GO
I WILL BE BY YOUR SIDE... BY YOUR SIDE
*
YOUR DREAMS AND HOPES
WILL COME TO LIFE COZ’
I WILL NEVER EVER LET YOU DOWN
*
YOUR HEART AND MINE
WALKS WITH DESIRE
NO WALLS BETWEEN US
WITH EVERY SMILE YOU LIFT ME UP
YOU PUT ME HIGH
NO NEED TO STRUGGLE
NO NEED TO HIDE
*
(REPEAT CHORUS)
*
AND I KNOW SOMEDAY WE'LL FIND A WAY
NO DREAMS WILL SHATTER NO HOPES WILL FAIL
*
(REPEAT CHORUS TILL FADE)
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Old 03-03-2009, 02:18 PM   #29
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Ohhh thanks for this share of you. It´s a really lovely song!
I actually wrote "Realist" time ago, so don´t you worry. I use to feel worser if that could even be jaja, but time heals it all!!

A question that may not be relate to anything of this... You dont speak spanish, right?
Just curious...

Take care, Sonne
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Old 03-04-2009, 11:57 AM   #30
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I don't speak spanish fluently but I understand since we had spanish lessons way back in school. My ancestors spoke spanish fluently, jejeje.. because our country, Philippines was colonized before by spanish conquistadors in year 15 hundreds.
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By the way, thank you for appreciating the lyrics of “ BY YOUR SIDE” ,even though you haven't heard the song per se.
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Maybe, I can post a poem I made about finding one true love. I hope its not corny for you coz’ this poem was converted into a song afterwards. I could have kept it in my drawer for a life time and maybe not be able to share it with others until my singer composer friend saw this piece. And she said she love it... Here goes the poem before the conversion.

YOU ARE MINE
By Greenpoet

I have seen love in many faces
But never been struck by its power
My heart has never been compelled to sing
Though the melodies are there for me.
*
Yesterday, I toiled and plowed as life goes on
Turning the pages of my days into years
Writing and dreaming about one love deeply,
For there are many things I often wondered.
*
My heart was winter –bound until
I heard you sing;
Suddenly my heart sang the day
You struck love on me.
*
My hopes were homeless things before
I saw your eyes
I had no wings to fly until
You carried me through
*
My heart is compelled to love
As the sun is compelled to rise
To give light as the day begins
Then sets with magical tones as it ends.
*
Oh heart of love,
That gives boundless pleasures of
Coloring my blues to hues of rainbow
My pilgrim heart treasures you.
*
My love...
My one love...
My everlasting love...
You Are Mine....
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