09-18-2008, 10:47 PM | #1 |
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Hi to everyone!!! Let me know what you think about!
I believed
Now I´m broken The day I´d gave you my soul… I didn´t thought you will give it me back broken *I believed all the nice words All the promises and smiles But while I fell more in love with you… You already scatter your love in other corners I´ve thought I´ve heared you say I was the only one* *Now that I´m told you´re playing behind my back I begin to smell the fragance of doubt*1 And it eat into me to think the calls without answering Were of one of your lovers I begun to doubt of your mysterious went out Those nights in which you called to say don´t get alarm By your delay because you have to end a lot of work Now I know what kind of job did you worn out Otherwise I don´t explain myself you driving me back *Est *Est1 How many were the poor things that thought you were a man? I wonder if you acted like the misunderstood husband Just to see how many flies fall and later carry them to a hidden place Oh man… How you fooled at me! I thought I could believe in you A thousand of whys come to my head But they will keep on without an answer cause I go *Est1 I don´t know if you can see what I mean You were able to lie right at my face Look! I´m able to tell all the TRUE right at your face Go away and never ever come back Get out of my way and don´t you dare to say a thing Take care, Sonne |
09-20-2008, 01:57 PM | #2 |
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Well, I see no one care
I personally love this one. Think it´s been good written and its melody is more than just beautiful. I can´get enough of it!! jeje Take care, Sonne P.S. Does anyone know how to delete a thread? So it doesn´t occupy place in here... |
09-22-2008, 01:12 PM | #3 |
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Sonne,
I quite liked it actually. What is the melody to it though? Is there somewhere I can listen to it? Only administrators and moderators can delete threads and we only delete them for specific reasons. This wouldn't be one of those times. It think it would be a shame to delete this. I know people have read it as you can tell by the amount of times the thread has been viewed however, maybe not everyone knows how to express their thoughts on it. Members poetry and music is very personal and I find that people sometimes don't comment in case they cause offence. |
09-22-2008, 01:40 PM | #4 |
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I understand that for sure that peolpe may not say something for having fear of offend, it ain´t my case, but I was no troublesome about no replies.
I just thought that maybe no one has reaed it, but you are right... Some people does. I can´t give you a link to hear the song cause it´s only in my mind and I haven´t yet put it in the internet. I don´t really am the creator of writting music I just write, but this one particullary I made it up in my mind and I think it sound beautiful (Modesty aside haha) Take care and glad that it has please you! Sonne |
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I don´t really am the creator of writting music I just write...
(Correcting the grammar) I´m not really the creator of writting music I just write... (songs, poems, stories, etc). Take care, Sonne |
09-27-2008, 12:21 PM | #6 |
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"Blue in the heart of the night"
Looking left... looking right Then I bow my head and see my feet They´re still young but somehow frozen *And I don´t know why I´m feeling down I just can´t stop missing I miss the sky I miss the trees I miss the beach And the loving waves Nothing here makes me wanna stick around* I keep on walking and I´m all alone Suddenly I feel a tear upon my cheek And I don´t know why I´m crying Well... maybe it´s everything! *... Sometimes I feel that everything it´s just too much I don´t feel myself able to continue and I know you´d rather hear a lie And sometimes I feel I have failed you I´m sorry but bear in mind that I love you *... (x2) |
09-30-2008, 07:41 AM | #7 |
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Hi again:
Trying I throw myself into the music oceans Trying to forget what you have said Trying to forget the way to cry Trying to escape from a nightmare My face is wet and my pillow as well I try to stop my crying but my nerves caress the hell *I remember well how he have smiled yesterday I remember heared him say “Mom I´m all right!” I´ve brought him this book cause he´s asked me for So don´t say I can´t enter to visit him* Do you know how many times he gave me an embrace? He said he´s proud of me and I should go on no matter what He also said “I love you, sorry mother for have forgetting the helm” He dried my tears away when I told him it already doesn´t matter *Est I didn´t realice then that he was saying goodbye He was just sixteen years old, he was my baby He´s still alive, so don´t tell me ugly lies and let me pass to watch him I´ve heared them say he´s gone yesterday at night I was yesterday with him and he looked fine My mind don´t want to understand he´s gone away *Est Some say I should sue the hospital for haven´t told immediately But in my mind there´s no place for fights It´s my son who has been taking from me not something material I can´t fight for money in name of my son I can´t even stop to cry because it hurt too much *Est (x2) |
10-04-2008, 11:57 AM | #8 |
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Digo la verdad, pero no creo tenerla siempre
Algunas cosas cambiaron, algunas se quedaron igual Y vos pensas que pensé mejor las cosas Pero no cambiaré de opinión, mi amor Deja de pensar que diré que no Hay gente que dice palabras hechas de humo Y gente como yo que cuando dice algo, lo dice en serio *Tu sombra oculta la luz de tu oscuridad Y te das cuenta de la verdad… Ellos juzgan tu mente sin conocerte Y describen como será tu vida de acá en más Aun asÃ:censored: ves la oscuridad de tu claridad Y te das cuenta de que todo está mezclado De que no hay cosas homogéneas (x2)* Por eso desconfÃ:censored:as de mis palabras Y trato de decirte que como hay lluvia hay arcoÃ:censored:ris Y como hay mentiras, también existen mis palabras No trates de decirte que todo el mundo es igual Porque no es asÃ:censored:! *Est Algunas cosas cambiaron, algunas se quedaron igual Y vos pensas que pensé mejor las cosas Pero te digo que no es asÃ:censored:! |
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Looking for a home
You find yourself alone and afraid For doesn´t know where you will be tomorrow Walking with scars on you that kill all the faith in you You don´t already trust anyone fearing the spark of a lie Distrust in your eyes follows you everywhere And you turn vulnerable when your hand is open You turn humble when they throw you a penny People pass you by with a smile Sharing each others joy and then… When they look at you put pity faces Day is cold and you are all alone *Your eyes are looking for a home A warm and lovely place to be With joy and please to feel free While you return into your own cold boots And your wet jacket with broken sleeves* A tear is ready to fall and your hands dry it away Your big Brown eyes looked filled with fears You are all alone on this huge world You see everybody smiling and laughing While… *Est You´re only eleven years old You got… YOU SHOULD got a future But no one stop passing next to you And I know that you wish it for Cause… *Est |
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"No answer"
What do you do when you don´t know to go on? When every wall close around you down? When the sky never show a glimpse of light? When your heart awake crying and go to sleep dying? How could you swim towards the another shore If you should swim eternally ´cause it´s too far? *Sometimes there´s just no answer to Even if you wanna hear something else Sometimes you will see that you must do things… You don´t really like, but it´s the only way to shut them up Even if in your inner a voice shout “I don´t bear it!” Drink the vodka down and go on!* When eyes don´t watch you you begin to destroy yourself I said you can get it and Darling!... you will get it, yes you will Everybody talk to your ear trying to weak my words away In your mind you face a thousand of emotions You feel it´s too much and you wanna give up You fall kneeling and you yell to heaven but… *Est If you understand my song you´ll see you´re different You can´t even imagen how many stupid people are on earth It´s easier to count the few people smart and with good heart there are Don´t let yourself bring down for situations or things they say Even though you don´t understand why things work this way Cause honey!... *Est |
11-04-2008, 11:34 PM | #11 |
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Invicible things
I thought I was walking among the ruins But not long ago I recall some words of hope For each fire there´s an end For each heartache there´s also an end *Earth make us think a lot about give up But there´s so many invicible things That long for stay us alive*1 Life could be easier and even more beautiful But this earth is riddled with people… That fight everyday to keep us down We shouldn´t accepted it… We can´t do it! Otherwise we would be the same Unfortunatelly times in which we stand up are long ago… *Now the dark-skinned lady is respected Now the East children are respected Now the women are respected Now all of the different races are respected Tell me are you stupid? Shame fall on you if you truely believe it* Instead of fight for our rights And refuse us to injustice We sit in front of the box that get us stupid We swallow every little lies they tell us Ignorance is manipulable And swarms get used on it. *Est *Est1 *Est |
11-18-2008, 07:44 PM | #12 |
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"More than once"
*I´m used to suffer As much as I am used breath Sometimes the river can´t stop its way Making me used to cry Forgive me but I can´t rely on you Please don´t look at me this way* Thanks to that I´ve weaken more than once And I don´t wanna pass again through what I have passed once I only need time and no… That you come up to say me life go away I owe a little bit of support to my heart I can´t give it the back again I´m so used to sadness That I arrive to think about that there exist nothing more than that But once somebody told me that there is much more Give me time,let me recover completely And if I get to do it please… Don´t tear apart what I got Because… *Est (x2) |
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"Pretend to be perfect"
Everybody´s fooling Everybody´s faking Pretend to be perfect Everybody´s blaming Everybody´s denying Pretend to be perfect But *the humbleness is the better way To perfection* Some dress their faces Some hide secrets Pretend to be perfect Some tell tales Some adorn their lives Prented to be perfect *est And everybody´s pretending to be perfect (x4) They don´tknow that who pretend to be perfect Are the ones you can smell a thousand miles away Cause *Est *Est |
12-11-2008, 12:48 PM | #14 |
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"Still there´s left a eatable piece"
I´ve thought tenderness was just a Word I´ve ever doubt about people that laugh I´ve putted into my head to be surrounded by insensitives ones But life show me have been wrong today *The apple is rotten, but Still there´s left a eatable piece We compel to look for the fifth foot of the cat Instead of open the eyes and let wanting to find a rotten seed Write with love it´s beyond of write with passion* At the start the scent of passion surrounds us But with pass of time love has grown It ain´t that passion is less important Just that we have found out ourselves like two persons that share… Besides bed, hours of the living together I´ve thought that at this hour of the match I´d write full of boring That I´d fight to find defects in you But the both of us carry with them I know that this time is in vain and I´d just be a fool *Est You´re lying in the paraguayan hammock And I sat in the chair hammocking you with the foot While I drink “mate” observing a Little parrot Rain has ended to fall and scented the ground I see along the green field in front of my feet Where calmness and tenderness hide away *Est (x2) |
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"Heart of a child"
*Nostalgia woke up again In the heart of a child exile from her land Tears ran by her little face* (x2) Remembering her friends playing with the rag ball Stamping on the powder of the street She´d got the “luck” of having an aunt living in Europe That went to her the day her parents passed away By a bomb that exploided in a store they were Here in the old continent she started the school There she couldn´t never go by poverty She found it hard at the beginning But time passes by and children doesn´t notice any difference Slowly she find a new place to be into life *Est She always remind her little friends And now that she learn to write with trembling handwritting She wrote a letter to them saying “I miss you so” Answer arrive days later by Mariana´handwritting Cause the children didn´t knew about letters She wrote “We all miss you too, Any” A letter she´s holding with pain watching into the ocean *Est “I´m happy here with my aunt that take care so much ofme But there´s something into my chest that burns like hell I miss my neighbourhood, my friends and Mariana” Someone said -Would you like to go back home? “I think you can´t ask me something like that But if you want an answer I will tell you That I would love to be with my friends, my land and Mariana there If all my little town “my land” could eat each single day like they do here” (x2) *Est |
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