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Old 09-18-2008, 10:47 PM   #1
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I believed

Now I´m broken
The day I´d gave you my soul…
I didn´t thought you will give it me back broken
*I believed all the nice words
All the promises and smiles
But while I fell more in love with you…
You already scatter your love in other corners
I´ve thought I´ve heared you say I was the only one*
*Now that I´m told you´re playing behind my back
I begin to smell the fragance of doubt*1
And it eat into me to think the calls without answering
Were of one of your lovers
I begun to doubt of your mysterious went out
Those nights in which you called to say don´t get alarm
By your delay because you have to end a lot of work
Now I know what kind of job did you worn out
Otherwise I don´t explain myself you driving me back
*Est *Est1
How many were the poor things that thought you were a man?
I wonder if you acted like the misunderstood husband
Just to see how many flies fall and later carry them to a hidden place
Oh man… How you fooled at me! I thought I could believe in you
A thousand of whys come to my head
But they will keep on without an answer cause I go
*Est1
I don´t know if you can see what I mean
You were able to lie right at my face
Look! I´m able to tell all the TRUE right at your face
Go away and never ever come back
Get out of my way and don´t you dare to say a thing


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Old 09-20-2008, 01:57 PM   #2
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Well, I see no one care
I personally love this one. Think it´s been good written and its melody is more than just beautiful. I can´get enough of it!! jeje
Take care, Sonne

P.S. Does anyone know how to delete a thread? So it doesn´t occupy place in here...
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Old 09-22-2008, 01:12 PM   #3
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Sonne,

I quite liked it actually. What is the melody to it though? Is there somewhere I can listen to it?

Only administrators and moderators can delete threads and we only delete them for specific reasons. This wouldn't be one of those times. It think it would be a shame to delete this. I know people have read it as you can tell by the amount of times the thread has been viewed however, maybe not everyone knows how to express their thoughts on it. Members poetry and music is very personal and I find that people sometimes don't comment in case they cause offence.
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Old 09-22-2008, 01:40 PM   #4
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I understand that for sure that peolpe may not say something for having fear of offend, it ain´t my case, but I was no troublesome about no replies.
I just thought that maybe no one has reaed it, but you are right... Some people does.
I can´t give you a link to hear the song cause it´s only in my mind and I haven´t yet put it in the internet. I don´t really am the creator of writting music I just write, but this one particullary I made it up in my mind and I think it sound beautiful (Modesty aside haha)
Take care and glad that it has please you!
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Old 09-22-2008, 01:45 PM   #5
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I don´t really am the creator of writting music I just write...

(Correcting the grammar)

I´m not really the creator of writting music I just write... (songs, poems, stories, etc).

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Old 09-27-2008, 12:21 PM   #6
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"Blue in the heart of the night"

Looking left... looking right
Then I bow my head and see my feet
They´re still young but somehow frozen

*And I don´t know why
I´m feeling down
I just can´t stop missing
I miss the sky
I miss the trees
I miss the beach
And the loving waves
Nothing here makes me wanna stick around*

I keep on walking and I´m all alone
Suddenly I feel a tear upon my cheek
And I don´t know why I´m crying
Well... maybe it´s everything!

*...

Sometimes I feel that everything it´s just too much
I don´t feel myself able to continue and
I know you´d rather hear a lie
And sometimes I feel I have failed you
I´m sorry but bear in mind that I love you
*... (x2)
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Old 09-30-2008, 07:41 AM   #7
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Hi again:


Trying
I throw myself into the music oceans
Trying to forget what you have said
Trying to forget the way to cry
Trying to escape from a nightmare
My face is wet and my pillow as well
I try to stop my crying but my nerves caress the hell

*I remember well how he have smiled yesterday
I remember heared him say “Mom I´m all right!”
I´ve brought him this book cause he´s asked me for
So don´t say I can´t enter to visit him*

Do you know how many times he gave me an embrace?
He said he´s proud of me and I should go on no matter what
He also said “I love you, sorry mother for have forgetting the helm”
He dried my tears away when I told him it already doesn´t matter

*Est

I didn´t realice then that he was saying goodbye
He was just sixteen years old, he was my baby
He´s still alive, so don´t tell me ugly lies and let me pass to watch him
I´ve heared them say he´s gone yesterday at night
I was yesterday with him and he looked fine
My mind don´t want to understand he´s gone away

*Est

Some say I should sue the hospital for haven´t told immediately
But in my mind there´s no place for fights
It´s my son who has been taking from me not something material
I can´t fight for money in name of my son
I can´t even stop to cry because it hurt too much

*Est (x2)
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Old 10-04-2008, 11:57 AM   #8
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Digo la verdad, pero no creo tenerla siempre

Algunas cosas cambiaron, algunas se quedaron igual
Y vos pensas que pensé mejor las cosas
Pero no cambiaré de opinión, mi amor
Deja de pensar que diré que no
Hay gente que dice palabras hechas de humo
Y gente como yo que cuando dice algo, lo dice en serio

*Tu sombra oculta la luz de tu oscuridad
Y te das cuenta de la verdad…
Ellos juzgan tu mente sin conocerte
Y describen como será tu vida de acá en más
Aun asÃ:censored: ves la oscuridad de tu claridad
Y te das cuenta de que todo está mezclado
De que no hay cosas homogéneas (x2)*

Por eso desconfÃ:censored:as de mis palabras
Y trato de decirte que como hay lluvia hay arcoÃ:censored:ris
Y como hay mentiras, también existen mis palabras
No trates de decirte que todo el mundo es igual
Porque no es asÃ:censored:!

*Est

Algunas cosas cambiaron, algunas se quedaron igual
Y vos pensas que pensé mejor las cosas
Pero te digo que no es asÃ:censored:!
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Old 10-28-2008, 08:33 PM   #9
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Looking for a home

You find yourself alone and afraid
For doesn´t know where you will be tomorrow
Walking with scars on you that kill all the faith in you
You don´t already trust anyone fearing the spark of a lie
Distrust in your eyes follows you everywhere
And you turn vulnerable when your hand is open
You turn humble when they throw you a penny
People pass you by with a smile
Sharing each others joy and then…
When they look at you put pity faces
Day is cold and you are all alone

*Your eyes are looking for a home
A warm and lovely place to be
With joy and please to feel free
While you return into your own cold boots
And your wet jacket with broken sleeves*

A tear is ready to fall and your hands dry it away
Your big Brown eyes looked filled with fears
You are all alone on this huge world
You see everybody smiling and laughing
While…

*Est

You´re only eleven years old
You got… YOU SHOULD got a future
But no one stop passing next to you
And I know that you wish it for
Cause…

*Est
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Old 11-02-2008, 12:56 PM   #10
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"No answer"

What do you do when you don´t know to go on?
When every wall close around you down?
When the sky never show a glimpse of light?
When your heart awake crying and go to sleep dying?
How could you swim towards the another shore
If you should swim eternally ´cause it´s too far?

*Sometimes there´s just no answer to
Even if you wanna hear something else
Sometimes you will see that you must do things…
You don´t really like, but it´s the only way to shut them up
Even if in your inner a voice shout “I don´t bear it!”
Drink the vodka down and go on!*

When eyes don´t watch you you begin to destroy yourself
I said you can get it and Darling!... you will get it, yes you will
Everybody talk to your ear trying to weak my words away
In your mind you face a thousand of emotions
You feel it´s too much and you wanna give up
You fall kneeling and you yell to heaven but…

*Est

If you understand my song you´ll see you´re different
You can´t even imagen how many stupid people are on earth
It´s easier to count the few people smart and with good heart there are
Don´t let yourself bring down for situations or things they say
Even though you don´t understand why things work this way
Cause honey!...

*Est
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Old 11-04-2008, 11:34 PM   #11
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Invicible things

I thought I was walking among the ruins
But not long ago I recall some words of hope
For each fire there´s an end
For each heartache there´s also an end

*Earth make us think a lot about give up
But there´s so many invicible things
That long for stay us alive*1

Life could be easier and even more beautiful
But this earth is riddled with people…
That fight everyday to keep us down
We shouldn´t accepted it… We can´t do it!
Otherwise we would be the same
Unfortunatelly times in which we stand up are long ago…

*Now the dark-skinned lady is respected
Now the East children are respected
Now the women are respected
Now all of the different races are respected
Tell me are you stupid?
Shame fall on you if you truely believe it*

Instead of fight for our rights
And refuse us to injustice
We sit in front of the box that get us stupid
We swallow every little lies they tell us
Ignorance is manipulable
And swarms get used on it.

*Est
*Est1
*Est
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Old 11-18-2008, 07:44 PM   #12
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"More than once"

*I´m used to suffer
As much as I am used breath
Sometimes the river can´t stop its way
Making me used to cry
Forgive me but I can´t rely on you
Please don´t look at me this way*

Thanks to that I´ve weaken more than once
And I don´t wanna pass again through what I have passed once
I only need time and no…
That you come up to say me life go away
I owe a little bit of support to my heart
I can´t give it the back again

I´m so used to sadness
That I arrive to think about that there exist nothing more than that
But once somebody told me that there is much more
Give me time,let me recover completely
And if I get to do it please… Don´t tear apart what I got

Because…

*Est (x2)
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Old 12-04-2008, 12:06 PM   #13
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"Pretend to be perfect"

Everybody´s fooling
Everybody´s faking
Pretend to be perfect
Everybody´s blaming
Everybody´s denying
Pretend to be perfect

But *the humbleness is the better way
To perfection*

Some dress their faces
Some hide secrets
Pretend to be perfect
Some tell tales
Some adorn their lives
Prented to be perfect

*est

And everybody´s pretending to be perfect (x4)
They don´tknow that who pretend to be perfect
Are the ones you can smell a thousand miles away
Cause *Est

*Est
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Old 12-11-2008, 12:48 PM   #14
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"Still there´s left a eatable piece"

I´ve thought tenderness was just a Word
I´ve ever doubt about people that laugh
I´ve putted into my head to be surrounded by insensitives ones
But life show me have been wrong today

*The apple is rotten, but
Still there´s left a eatable piece
We compel to look for the fifth foot of the cat
Instead of open the eyes and let wanting to find a rotten seed
Write with love it´s beyond of write with passion*

At the start the scent of passion surrounds us
But with pass of time love has grown
It ain´t that passion is less important
Just that we have found out ourselves like two persons that share…
Besides bed, hours of the living together
I´ve thought that at this hour of the match I´d write full of boring
That I´d fight to find defects in you
But the both of us carry with them
I know that this time is in vain and I´d just be a fool

*Est

You´re lying in the paraguayan hammock
And I sat in the chair hammocking you with the foot
While I drink “mate” observing a Little parrot
Rain has ended to fall and scented the ground
I see along the green field in front of my feet
Where calmness and tenderness hide away

*Est (x2)
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"Heart of a child"

*Nostalgia woke up again
In the heart of a child exile from her land
Tears ran by her little face* (x2)
Remembering her friends playing with the rag ball
Stamping on the powder of the street
She´d got the “luck” of having an aunt living in Europe
That went to her the day her parents passed away
By a bomb that exploided in a store they were
Here in the old continent she started the school
There she couldn´t never go by poverty
She found it hard at the beginning
But time passes by and children doesn´t notice any difference
Slowly she find a new place to be into life

*Est

She always remind her little friends
And now that she learn to write with trembling handwritting
She wrote a letter to them saying “I miss you so”
Answer arrive days later by Mariana´handwritting
Cause the children didn´t knew about letters
She wrote “We all miss you too, Any”
A letter she´s holding with pain watching into the ocean

*Est

“I´m happy here with my aunt that take care so much ofme
But there´s something into my chest that burns like hell
I miss my neighbourhood, my friends and Mariana”
Someone said -Would you like to go back home?
“I think you can´t ask me something like that
But if you want an answer I will tell you
That I would love to be with my friends, my land and Mariana there
If all my little town “my land” could eat each single day like they do here” (x2)

*Est
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